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It's impossible, you say.
We're too different, you say.
It just won't work, you say.

Okay.

Different people don't go together.
They may try, they may even like each other,
but it can't work.
They simply don't agree with each other.

So you say.
Okay.

But you spoke of these two the other day.
They were different,
fire and ice,
roses and dust.

And yet,
they loved each other,
and even though it didn't end well,
they had their time together.

Which means they were not so different.
In the end, fire and ice are simply two sides of one,
and every rose turns to dust one day.

And we're not that different, you and I.


We've been at this for some time,
coming and going,
and screams and tears,
and whatnot,
but, what do you think,
about forgetting all that?

Let's pretend it's our first date.
And it'll go well for us.
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This is for another week challenge by #WritersChallenge
Popped in my mind as I was working on the Lyanna Stark thingy. Not dedicated to anybody. (seriously, I don't know if I could ever have such a conversation with anybody :rofl:)

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Love the free verse, and that last bit especially, Seriously, this is the one of the few poems on this site that doesn't make me want to barf
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=Muse-of-Thor Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, really? Thanks a lot! :aww:
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