It's unbelievable how I just can't force myself to stop staring at the photomanipulation and write a critique! You've walked a steep path for a very short time and the results are showing it undoubtedly! First of all, the hair is just amazing - it's a simple hairdo, but in the same time it's a complicated work to paint. Second, I adore the flowing rose petals. They are in a beautiful synchronous movement that brings out the enchanting impact. The right side of the field, where it should be met with the horizon, is a bit too sharp. It should be in a blurry state, just like on the right side, hence it's too distant from the viewer's point of standing. There is a lot more to be done and developed in the light section of the wishing star, such as the different layers of the reflecting light, but it's not something to be dying for, right? To sum it up - Everything is wonderful, eventhough it may be missing some technique, but for somebody who started working with PS a couple of months ago, Den, you've done a fantastic job!
You've walked a steep path for a very short time and the results are showing it undoubtedly! First of all, the hair is just amazing - it's a simple hairdo, but in the same time it's a complicated work to paint. Second, I adore the flowing rose petals. They are in a beautiful synchronous movement that brings out the enchanting impact.
The right side of the field, where it should be met with the horizon, is a bit too sharp. It should be in a blurry state, just like on the right side, hence it's too distant from the viewer's point of standing. There is a lot more to be done and developed in the light section of the wishing star, such as the different layers of the reflecting light, but it's not something to be dying for, right?
To sum it up - Everything is wonderful, eventhough it may be missing some technique, but for somebody who started working with PS a couple of months ago, Den, you've done a fantastic job!
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