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It feels so alone to wander in the night
On the wet city streets

It feels so cold to be embraced by the wind
To be blended
To surrender

It feels like walking in the fields
In winter
Through the snow
It feels like...
..you're going to sleep there
embraced by the cold.

I'm so alone, walking in the streets
Without purposes
No direction
Just following the vanishing northern stars

And I don't even notice
The snowflakes melting on my cheek
And
All over my body.
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:iconrabenschwert:
... and it feels like walking through blood and mud, blue flashlight reflecting in the tears on your lonely face...

I like your poem a lot, sister, love you!
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Mood: Love =Muse-of-Thor Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle: Habe dich auch lieb. Und deine Versen auch!
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=Muse-of-Thor Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nee, du bist süßer :tighthug: :P
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:iconsaza11:
great words sweetie :hug:
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=Muse-of-Thor Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, dear :hug:
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:iconsaza11:
It is a pleasure :hug:
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:iconflyingmantaray:
Beautiful poem. Altough I like winter, I still think it also applies to broken love, when everything can feel so cold :(
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=Muse-of-Thor Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Man... I never thought of that! Seriously!
It was November 2010 and it was freezing in the room I inhabited then, so it just came to mind...

And, also, maybe not only broken love, maybe solitude in general, too..
Thank you, mate :huggle:
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:iconflyingmantaray:
Yeah, solitude in general. I think this one is quite fitting for some of my feelings that I have and have had in the past 2 years ;)
Thank you for posting this one
:hug:
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